Oh, Koray! This goes beyond my expectations for this week! You have a strong relationship with the characters you are speaking to. I can feel that relationship very clearly and it makes me care for this character very much. I love that you start out with an apology for not seeing them. I wonder if he Wants permission from them to come visit? I also wonder if he is able to reach out to them now because he has located Fiona's killer? I wonder if he wants to know what they would rather him do - a quick bullet to the head or slow torture.
Excellent leap forward this first week! I am impressed. 🥇🎨
Oh, Koray! This goes beyond my expectations for this week! You have a strong relationship with the characters you are speaking to. I can feel that relationship very clearly and it makes me care for this character very much. I love that you start out with an apology for not seeing them. I wonder if he Wants permission from them to come visit? I also wonder if he is able to reach out to them now because he has located Fiona's killer? I wonder if he wants to know what they would rather him do - a quick bullet to the head or slow torture.
Excellent leap forward this first week! I am impressed. 🥇🎨