1. Where are they physically? one sentence at least
a. My character named Rapp, he lives in Manhatten.
2. How do they spend their time/ what is their job? one sentence at least
a. He spends his time training, in the gym or at a firing range. He works as a personal trainer to make money.
3. What is important to them? one sentence at least
a. What is important to Rapp is revenge on the person who killed his wife.
4. What are they anxious/worried about? one sentence at least
a. He is worried about not completing his task to get revenge.
5. What are five other Given Circumstances about them? Age/education/health level/economic level/ status/ favorite hobby/family set up/physical fitness/ anything at all from their past? Be specific and creative!
a. He got kicked out of Brown University for his anger and his repressed rage.
b. Once the love of his life passed away, he only focuses on getting revenge and nothing else, making his social life difficult.
c. He lost his family at a young age so he doesn't speak to anyone since it's hard for him to make friends.
d. He is good at his job because he has been training like a navy seal for months.
e.He has an IQ of 150, but since all he can focus on is revenge, he can't use that big brain of his for anything else.
Koray! I am so excited that you are making a gritty revenge character. I love it! You have some really great material to build from here. You absolutely have a "want" to guide him which is great. Have you decided to whom this character is speaking to? Is it going to be the party responsible for the death of the love of his life? That will provide you with some strong tactics/verbs in deed. Wonderful work! Keep creating.